--- dpn/en/index.wml-template	2010/03/25 15:38:15	4
+++ dpn/en/index.wml-template	2010/04/27 11:58:17	156
@@ -2,6 +2,11 @@
 #use wml::debian::acronyms
 
 <!--
+$Id$
+$Rev$
+  -->
+
+<!--
  Copyright (c) 2010 Alexander Reichle-Schmehl
  Add other people here
  All rights reserved.
@@ -19,7 +24,7 @@
  THIS SOFTWARE IS PROVIDED BY THE COPYRIGHT HOLDERS AND CONTRIBUTORS "AS
  IS" AND ANY EXPRESS OR IMPLIED WARRANTIES, INCLUDING, BUT NOT LIMITED
  TO, THE IMPLIED WARRANTIES OF MERCHANTABILITY AND FITNESS FOR A
- PARTicular purpose ARE DISCLAIMED. IN NO EVENT SHALL THE COPYRIGHT
+ PARTICULAR PURPOSE ARE DISCLAIMED. IN NO EVENT SHALL THE COPYRIGHT
  OWNER OR CONTRIBUTORS BE LIABLE FOR ANY DIRECT, INDIRECT, INCIDENTAL,
  SPECIAL, EXEMPLARY, OR CONSEQUENTIAL DAMAGES (INCLUDING, BUT NOT
  LIMITED TO, PROCUREMENT OF SUBSTITUTE GOODS OR SERVICES; LOSS OF USE,
@@ -30,12 +35,13 @@
 -->
 
 <a name="0"></a>
-<p>Welcome to this year's second issue of DPN, the newsletter for the
+<p>Welcome to this year's XXXth issue of DPN, the newsletter for the
 Debian community. Topics covered in this issue include:</p>
 <ul>
-  <li>foo</li>
-  <li>bar</li>
-  <li>baz</li>
+  <li><a href="#1">foo</a></li>
+  <li><a href="#2">bar</a></li>
+  <li><a href="#3">baz</a></li>
+  <li><a href="#4">... and much more</a>.</li>
 </ul>
 
 
@@ -64,11 +70,11 @@
 
 
 <a name="11"></a>
-<h2>New Developers and Maintainer</h2>
+<h2>New Developers and Maintainers</h2>
 
 <p>XXX applicants have been
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-newmaint/2009/01/msg00009.html">accepted</a>
-as Debian Developers and XXX applicant has been
+as Debian Developers and XXX applicants has been
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2008/12/msg00086.html">accepted</a>
 as Debian Maintainer since the previous issue of the Debian
 Project News.  Please welcome X, Y, and Z into our project!</p>
@@ -79,8 +85,8 @@
 <h2>Release-critical bugs statistics for the upcoming release</h2>
 
 <p>According to the <a href="http://bts.turmzimmer.net/details.php">unofficial
-RC-bugs count</a>, the upcoming release Debian 6.0
-<q>Squeeze</q> is currently affected by XXrelease critical bugs.  XX of them
+RC-bugs count</a>, the upcoming release, Debian 6.0
+<q>Squeeze</q>, is currently affected by XX release critical bugs.  XX of them
 have already been fixed in Debian's <q>unstable</q> branch. Of the remaining
 XX release critical bugs, XX already have a patch (which might need
 testing) and XXX are marked as pending.</p>